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The Birth of Mancafar

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Part 1 - Cannibal

The darkness roared like black thunder as the first ate the second. The eldest of the tar-like sludge beings began its slow, deliberate rampage. It slowly consumed the second born of the planet; its inky, slimy body oozed down the gaping maw of the first predator, known henceforth as the Cannibal.

It took a full turn of the red moon for the Cannibal to finish consuming its brother. Its tar-like body glistened in the dim starlight. It had no eyes, ears, nose, or tongue to sense its surroundings; all it could do was undulate aimlessly until it found more prey.

It began to ooze to the East, spreading its viscous body thin and low to search as much surface area as it could. It took a full turn of the blue moon, with its much shorter cycle than its crimson equal, to find another of its brethren. When it did, the Cannibal began consuming it without hesitation. Its prey, identical in shape and form, sensed that its body was being engulfed and began to flee. A slow fleeing it was, though, as it did not possess arms or legs.

What took place was a gelatinous being gnawing and swallowing another gelatinous being. There was no biting, as the Cannibal did not have teeth, and there was no chewing either, since all that was in its mouth were slimy inner walls and a throat as black as a starless night.

The prey of the Cannibal began to struggle less and less as more of its body disappeared down its foe's gullet. The Cannibal's cavernous stomach digested its victim efficiently, as it did once before, but something else happened as well. As the predator's body absorbed that of its prey, it began to grow; in size as well as in intellect. Another full turn of the red moon passed before the consumption was complete. After it was done, the Cannibal did not rest, but ventured forth to find new prey.

From creation, all the Cannibal knew was darkness, and it writhed aimlessly like all the rest of its kind. They all squirmed beneath the stars with no rhyme or reason; the purposeless beings of this unnamed planet were seemingly doomed to an absence of all things except the ground beneath them and the stars above.

The Cannibal shifted the paradigm by eating its second-born brother: the first act of one of the black slime species besides undulation. And so, a dark trend for a dark planet began.

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Part 2 - Rivals

The Cannibal gorged itself on its brethren one after another. The red and blue moons lapped the planet dozens of times while the macabre buffet was taking place.

One dark evening, as the Cannibal was searching for its next meal, it came across something new. The ground beneath it rumbled slightly, as if something gargantuan was moving. At this point, the Cannibal was tremendous in girth. After consuming countless of its kin, it was now fifty times its original size.

The gargantuan thing descending from a nearby hill, rumbling the ground as it went, was a new encounter for the Cannibal. But it was familiar as well: an amorphous black blob that rivaled the Cannibal in size.

It seemed the Cannibal was not the only one who partook in the black flesh feast. The gargantuan one ambled downhill, shaking the ground as the Cannibal sat motionless.

It knew that the gargantuan was approaching, so it laid motionless in ambush. Against one that it could not overpower with its sheer size, striking first would be essential to victory.

The gargantuan slithered forward, unaware of the danger. Its slimy flesh brushed against the Cannibal and it froze. But before it could turn and investigate, the Cannibal struck! With as much speed as an amorphous blob could muster, it clamped its toothless maw around a chunk of the gargantuan one's flesh. It began to gnaw and swallow with all its might, relishing the sensation of its prey sliding down into its stomach.

The gargantuan retaliated by trying to consume the Cannibal in return. What unfolded was the first fight: the very first time that creatures on the nameless planet met with conflict against one another as equals and enemies.

The battle raged for many turns of the moons. The Cannibal had a slight advantage as it began eating first, but both combatants were consuming and regenerating as the fight went on.

After the hundredth turn of the red moon, the Cannibal had an idea: its foe could not consume it if it was lacking a mouth. The Cannibal clamped onto the gargantuan's mouth from the side with a massive gulp and sucked in its opponent’s greatest weapon. The gargantuan unwillingly released the part of the Cannibal it had in its mouth as it descended down the gaping throat of its consumer.

After that, it was a simple yet slow task to devour the rest of the gargantuan one. It took fifty more turns of the red moon to engulf the mass of its greatest foe, but once it was done, the Cannibal felt different.

Agony shot through its mouth as jagged black spikes poked out. The Cannibal writhed its massive frame in pain as it teethed. It continued to writhe and seethe for five turns of the blue moon as each black tooth emerged. When the teething was complete, the Cannibal rested for the first time since its birth in relief, but it was soon on its way again in search of its next meal.

As the moons turned, the Cannibal consumed more and more of its kind, but with each meal, its foes became greater and stronger. Consuming them was difficult but with each foe felled and fed upon, the Cannibal gained new strengths.

After it fought and slew a serpentine slime, it gained a tongue to taste and help devour prey more efficiently.

After it killed and claimed a cyclopsian blob, it gained eyes to search for prey easier.

After it slaughtered and slurped an elephantine fiend, it gained ears better to scan its surroundings.

The moons turned and turned and the Cannibal ate and ate, until one dark day, it came to a valley that was different from the rest of the planet. Looking down upon the valley, the Cannibal noticed its tiny kin; smaller and weaker, but they were many. These many small slimes slithered in and out of caverns dotted throughout the valley; they mingled and played and moved in peace, not even attempting to consume one another.

It was at this the Cannibal smiled an inky, jagged smile. There were many easy meals ahead of it and it did not wait to get started.

It descended into the valley with haste, shaking the ground as it pulsed across the land. The small slimes had no eyes or ears, so they could not identify the threat, but they knew something was coming as the world around them trembled.

They began to panic and scatter as the Cannibal engulfed them one at a time. Each small slime was hardly a mouthful, but this only encouraged the predator to gorge itself until none remained in the valley except itself. The massacre was over in less than a single turn of the blue moon.

The Cannibal began to make a noise: at first it was a coughing, hacking rasp, but as the fiend became used to the sensation, the noise became smoother and rhythmic. The Cannibal was laughing, and it was doing so deeply and sinisterly at the mayhem and destruction that it had just caused.

As pleased as the Cannibal was with its dark deeds, it was not satisfied, as it would never be satisfied...not as long as there were those it could consume.

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Part 3 - Sepurion


A thousand turns of the red moon had passed and the Cannibal had continued its primitive rampage, but, while it was hunting its brethren, the ones it did not eat began to change.

They began to realize that helping one another was easier than killing each other. They worked together to build shelters and acquire resources. The black sludge people did not need to eat or drink, nor did they age and reproduce, but over the course of time, they became infatuated with a certain mineral, which they dug for and carried and shared. This, in turn, caused those who gathered and collected to gradually change form into bipedal beings more capable of such tasks, as on this nameless planet, form follows function.

The ones who now walked loved the shining white gemstones, which the slime people thought were fallen stars. They called it farite, named after their word for starlight.

Due to their love of farite, they began searching and mining for it with their four spindly limbs: two to walk upon and two to use for digging. They collectively came to an agreement that whoever dug up the most farite would keep the largest portion while the rest was distributed among their society.

How much farite one possessed became a status symbol. They used the farite to decorate their dwellings and their inky black bodies. They would place them into their oozy flesh about their tiny, round eyes that they used to spot farite, their simple holish ears that they used to hear their kin, as well as their beaks which opened horizontally and used to speak in a lightly dripping language full of deeply undulating trills.

At first, they were a nomadic people, moving from cave system to cave system, until they found an open and barren desert devoid of everything save a tremendous amount of tall rocks. Into these rocks, they tunneled and created networks to live within. The best caverns at the top of the stone spires became the residence of the best miners. There they could look out their simple windows and gaze at the spire city that became their home. They called the city Sepurion, named after their word for tall rocks.

Settling in one place was comfortable for the slime people, but staying there meant that all that travelled through would encounter them. Due to the Cannibal's voracious appetite, these interlopers were far and few in number. Some would join the people of Sepurion, while others would try to devour them, and the latter were usually dealt with violently.

The amorphous invaders were set upon by a large number of volunteers willing to fight for their city. They bludgeoned their foes with rocks and stabbed them with their pointed hands, but the only true way to be rid of them was to consume their flesh. After wearing down an invader with attacks, the defenders would perform the primal deed of devouring. They did not relish the act of consuming the flesh of their kin, but they did so to protect their city.

The same individuals kept volunteering to defend Sepurion due to the glory and farite they received from their people in gratitude. They also grew stronger with each invader defeated and consumed, and after a while, they became known as the Aefor, named after the slime people’s word for defense.

Many turns of the moons passed as Sepurion flourished. The Aefor grew stronger and the city grew brighter with massive amounts of farite. All was well in the city, but unknown to the people within, who now called themselves Sepurians, their shining city attracted the attention of a fiend so powerful and sinister that they had little hope of survival.

The Cannibal, drawn towards the city lights, approached Sepurion. As its huge, gelatinous body shambled towards the rocky spires, it was intercepted by the Aefor, who had spotted the fiend's massive body from afar.

The Cannibal towered over the Aefor, but the defenders did not back down. Instead, they called out to the Cannibal and gave it a choice. They told it that it could join them to live in peace and in glorious starlight or it could perish at their hands.

At this, the Cannibal let out a mirthless laugh and gazed wickedly at all of the Aefor. Without warning, it struck. Using tendrils made of its viscous flesh, the Cannibal lashed and whipped the Aefor, crippling them before it devoured each member with remarkable speed.

As it cleaved through their ranks, some of the Aefor began to flee in terror, but instead of chasing them down, the Cannibal stopped suddenly as a new idea surfaced.

Whenever it came across a group of its kin, some would inevitably flee from its grasp, and chasing them down was tedious. With this new plan in mind, the Cannibal would ensure that its prey would come to it on their own.

As the few remaining of the Aefor fled, the Cannibal observed their bodies with its many eyes. It then began to transform: with sheer willpower and the strength gained from those it devoured, the Cannibal morphed its body so that it looked identical to one of the fleeing Aefor, save for the farite embedded into their body.

To shrink itself down to the size of its prey, it had to compress its body significantly. When it walked on its new, spindly legs it still shook the ground, but it figured it could use that to its advantage.

It waited a full turn of the red moon before it made its move. After adopting the guise of one of the Sepurians, it would infiltrate their ranks and consume their city from within.

When it reached the city walls, it was approached again by the Aefor. They greeted the Cannibal, unaware that it was the very beast that had decimated most of their defense force.

They asked the Cannibal what business it had in Sepurion and it replied that it was looking for shelter. After a brief interrogation, the remaining Aefor allowed the Cannibal to pass into the city, but as it walked by, the ground began to rumble slightly.

The Aefor asked why the ground shook when the Cannibal walked, to which it replied that it was heavy from consuming foes, and internally smiled as the prey took the bait.

The Aefor did not know what to make of that, but then one of them foolishly spoke up.

The fool stated that since it was heavy enough to shake the ground, its foe must have been massive. They then recounted to the other Aefor the tale of the huge fiend that had consumed most of their defense force just one turn of the red moon past. After that, realization seemed to strike them, but in the wrong way. The fool asked the Cannibal if it was the one who had defeated and consumed the monster.

The Cannibal grinned and corroborated the fool’s story. The Aefor let out a cheer at their comrades being avenged and escorted the Cannibal into the city, spreading word of its so-called heroics among the populace. It was lauded and praised and given a great dwelling atop one of the highest rock spires. From there, it began to scheme again, and the plan that formed was even more dark and treacherous.

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Part 4 - New Ways to Feed

The Cannibal's plan went just as intended; from its high dwelling, it all but ruled Sepurion. It made a deal with the Aefor that all those too powerful for them would be taken care of by the Cannibal, who now called themselves Mancafar, named for being a consumer of light in the tongue of the Sepurians. This name was given by the people of Sepurion, as the Cannibal had been gifted so much farite that it had to begin consuming it so that it could move about its vast dwelling high atop the tallest spire. Mancafar was a consumer of light in the eyes of the Sepurians, but they were also a consumer of dark: the inky flesh of invaders.

One day, about one thousand turns of the blue moon after Mancafar was named, an invader came to the city that was too great for the Aefor and they sent a messenger to Mancafar pleading for their aid. At once, they answered and stomped heavily, yet swiftly, to the city border where the invader assaulted.

Mancafar had not consumed a Sepurian other than those deemed unworthy by the populace. Some had taken to stealing farite from others, which was sternly and viciously condemned by all others. These thieves were given to Mancafar to rid their city of those who would dare disrupt their harmonious society, though these were rare occurrences, as the punishment for thievery was well known among the Sepurians.

Having not fed upon flesh, but only upon farite for a long while, Mancafar's craving grew as they approached the threat to Sepurion. When they met with the Aefor, they witnessed a being with powers they had never encountered before.

The Aefor were being slaughtered, not directly by this new foe, but by each other. Defenders of the city were striking and consuming one another in a frenzy borne seemingly of madness. Mancafar looked to the lone, distinct figure not so far away and realized they were controlling the Aefor somehow. As they began to approach the new being, their weight shook the ground and drew the attention of the maddened Aefor.

They set upon Mancafar in a blind fury, but they were each and every one felled by the light eater's might. Mancafar consumed the mad defenders until there were none left and returned their focus to the new being.

The creature was similar in description to the Sepurians, though they were much taller and had a bulbous head. As Mancafar approached the big head, they introduced themselves and queried as to the stranger's business in Sepurion, which the large-headed one acknowledged with a telepathic response.

Mancafar was initially surprised by the big head's telepathy, but this surprise was quickly overcome by a desire to take this power for their own benefit. Though, as Mancafar thought of this, the big head read the hungry one's mind and learned of their ill intent.

Quickly, the large-headed one began trying to seize control of Mancafar's mind, but could not. They had never met a foe like Mancafar and could not overpower their will. Mancafar laughed ominously as they approached their foe with slow, deliberate footsteps. The ground shook more and more until the big head could no longer stand and fell to the ground, for mighty in mind they were, but not so in body.

As the telepath laid before Mancafar, they cowered. Mancafar spoke in a softly warbling voice, soothing the telepath with a quivering premonition. They told the cowering one that after they had consumed them, they would use their power for a deed: one so great and ambitious that the telepath was enraptured.

They told the telepath that they planned to conquer not only Sepurion and other cities that may exist, but the whole planet. After they recounted their plan, they swiftly fell upon the telepath, rending them to shreds before consuming their mangled corpse.

After feasting, Mancafar felt something new within themselves for the first time in many turns of the moons: from afar, they felt others; they felt their existence with their mind from impossible distances. With this, and the inherited ability to control others, they plotted their conquest.


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Part 5 - Unity

With the Aefor completely destroyed by their maddened selves, Sepurion now only had a single defender, though that was more than enough to dissuade invaders. The city grew to rely on Mancafar so much for defense that they soon looked at them not only as a protector and hero, but as a leader. Soon, all decisions made for the city were influenced by the hungry one's will.

The fall of the Aefor was attributed to the foe, which Mancafar vanquished. They told the people of Sepurion of the dreaded foe that they dispatched and of the great battle that decimated the Aefor, but did not tell the people of the power they acquired in the process. They used this power to make wise and calculated decisions to further their goals of conquest, though, to the eyes of the Sepurians, their decision making was nothing short of miraculous and beneficial to all. Little did the people know that each decision was the tightening of a noose around their collective necks.

With their ability to sense beings from afar, Mancafar was able to defend the city more efficiently than ever before, but it was far from the only thing they used their powers for. They were able to focus their mind to sense large collectives of beings in cities similar to Sepurion and were able to create a map depicting close to half of the entire planet. With this map, they planned what they dubbed their 'Unification Protocol'.

This protocol was their plan to contact and absorb other cities into a network. They would then expand this network until they had every city on the planet under their control. They sent messengers to these various cities to convey their desire for unity. They showered the foreign cities with promises of protection and heaps of farite, and many happily accepted their proposal. These foreign lands became sister cities to Sepurion and benefitted from all Mancafar promised. Any threat to the network of cities was dealt with swiftly by Mancafar themself with great efficiency, for although they could not travel great distances quickly, they could sense beings over great distances and with incredible accuracy, which allowed them to plan interceptions accordingly.

After one thousand turns of the blue moon, Mancafar's network spanned the entire globe. Every city was taken into their folds and soon there were no threats left to any of them. Mancafar had united the entire planet, and together they became a single nation that was known as Mancafaria, named after their mighty and unchallenged leader. But despite all of that progress, this was not the end of the Unification Protocol; there was still one more step. The final step, the one that Mancafar was looking forward to the most: the consumption of all life on the planet.

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Part 6 - Engulfed


Ten thousand turns of the cobalt moon passed in utopian fashion for Mancafaria, but it all came to an end with frightening speed. It happened not one at a time, not even by the dozens, or hundreds, or thousands, but completely in unison. Upon one fateful turn of the crimson moon, Mancafar began to consume all life on the planet. They had acquired such mass that they used it to permeate the world, and they had slowly, but surely, dug their many unseen tentacles into the ground, through the core of the world, and spread them to all corners of the globe.

Each tentacle lashed out to snare those nearest and once coiled about their victims, immobilizing them, they grew mouths. Like macabre flowers, the mouths bloomed from each tentacle and their teeth sprouted like thin, inky black petals. They surrounded maws darker than black, in both appearance and intent. With vigour, they began to consume those they had ensnared, though the process was not quick. Slowly, and agonizingly, the mouthed tentacles of Mancafar ate their victims and swallowed them down until they reached the stomach of the world, the former core of the planet.

Mancafar, having planned this moment for many, many turns of the moons, knew that they would need a place to digest their prey in peace. For this reason, while burrowing their tentacles into the planet, they devoured the iron core of the world to make a tremendous hollow for their gluttonous needs. It is within this grand hollow that the prey they had captured would dissolve into their being.

Slowly, over the course of many turns of the moons, they digested their prey. They relished each second of their sinister buffet, for the digestion was slow enough for Mancafar to enjoy not only the taste of their victims, but their fear, pain, and desperation as well.

The citizens of Mancafaria cried out in agony and woe, asking for their saviour to rescue them, but, instead, the time had come for Mancafar to finally reveal their true nature and intent to their people. They told them of all their plans and desires. They told them of their folly and foolish trust. But, above all, they told them how very delicious their flesh and agony was as their bodies and minds dissolved before and within a greater being.

Soon, none were left alive save Mancafar themself. Alone, they dwelled on the now desolate world. They had accomplished all of their goals: they had consumed all living beings on the planet, as well as the core of the world in the process. However, their gluttony was endless, therefore they could not rest. They began to consume the very land until they had taken the entire globe within themselves.

After this, nothing was left of the original planet save its first born. Mancafar had swallowed all of it and now lingered in space: a new world. Mancafar, once a being of sightless, idiotic hunger, had ascended to become a celestial body; one of darkness deeper than of the void around it. Forever, the eater of light remained in that sector of space.


Though their hunger is eternal and they shall never rest. Their dark arms, now on a planetary scale, reach out into the void towards other planets, moons, and stars; their endless greed darkening the skies above forevermore.

Thank you for reading The Birth of Mancafar!

This is one of the short stories in my collection, Unusual Tales for the Curious Mind, which is released on December 1, 2021.

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